Slug

 

Finally, here you are, I been waiting for you for hours.  I only had one or two, though, I know how you feel about me being messy out in public.  When other guys tried to buy me one, or talk me up with those lines of crap, I told them to dry up.  It ain't right to leave a girl sitting in a bar alone for so long, people get wrong ideas.  But you're here now, and it's all over with, so let's just be glad together, okay?  Here baby, have a drink, it'll remind you to love me.

Comments

[MkCrittenden]

Groovy! The ending has a tragic sting. OUch.

[Pamila Payne]

Glad you liked it.

[Barry J. Northern]

Short and alcoholic, a good combination.

[Carrie]

Could almost smell the alcohol breath. Gritty.

[Cormac Brown]

Amazing stuff, short and sweet.